Devil In The Bottle

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Devil In The Bottle

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i wrote this after my best friend got sick one night from drinking too much at a party that we were at. it's about alcohol and the effects it has on you.

"Devil In The Bottle"

Verse 1
Surrounded by pressure provided by peers
Downing the bottles of invincible fears
At last drop you lose your innocence
Too weak to hold on to your resistance
Few more rounds and you start to feel fine
Little do you know you're way over the line
Tomorrow is a brand new day. You will learn there's a price to pay

Chorus
Pushed over by the evil. You sold your soul to the devil
To the devil in the bottle. It's out of your control
There's no turning back now. The devil has your soul

Verse 2
Round and round, the room is spinning fast
Your friends laugh as you fall on your ass
The joke of the crowd with your inebriation
Whatever you see, it's hallucination
Dripping blood from the slash on your arm
You hold it tight like a good luck charm
Tomorrow is a brand new day. You will learn there's a price to pay

(Chorus)
Bridge pt 1
You say you love me, and you try to shove me, when I go to take your keys
You try to stand up, but you always end up, falling right down to your knees
pt 2
On your knees, sick as a dog. Holding your head, feeling it throb
Soon you'll be better but until then
You crawl in bed, you shake your head, and vow "never again"

(Chorus)
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wow cool

made me think of genie in a bottle by Christina Aguilera :dance:

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hardcoresum41fan wrote:wow cool

made me think of genie in a bottle by Christina Aguilera :dance:
umm...thank you lol :smile:
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yeah it's very good!
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spider-man wrote:yeah it's very good!
thanks a lot i appreciate it :smile:
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Cool song, mate, cool song.
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Hentaiman wrote:Cool song, mate, cool song.
thank you :smile:
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