its cool, its good how it goes from 'i wanna' to then 'i can'
:) good job!
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- Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:12 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: The Sound
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2668
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:10 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2554
Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try
its great. especially for what looks like a 1st attempt.. nice simple lyrics etc :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:09 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Confused...
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1464
Re: Confused...
its good that it ends on the title line, & its a well presented song :) i think maybe a change in the line "i'd die for something new" to something a little less... over-used if you know what i mean :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:07 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Away from You [a song i wrote]
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2329
Re: Away from You [a song i wrote]
it seems good, i'd like to hear it, to see how the words go, but overall its a decent song, well structured, etc :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:05 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: lol...
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2664
Re: lol...
lol
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:03 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: More To Feel
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2208
Re: More To Feel
its good, but it just needs another hook line in one of the verses, but deffo.. a good situation explanation! :D
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:58 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: I Know You Like It
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2147
Re: I Know You Like It
its good.. nice short & sharp lines, it'll make the song memorable :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:55 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Kept Running In Silence
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3199
Re: Kept Running In Silence
thats really good., youve put the story across well, and nice title :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:53 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Lyrics Help
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3183
Re: Lyrics Help
i think even reading through other ppls stuff is inspiring :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:50 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Steak and Salad
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3218
Re: Steak and Salad
cool :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:49 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Currently Untitled Poem...
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2300
Re: Currently Untitled Poem...
that is really cool.... very picture-painting :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:48 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Fool's Poem
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1453
Re: Fool's Poem
thats pretty inspiring... its hard to write songs about things, & youve incorporated that into a song...good :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:46 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Song Sample
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4431
Re: Song Sample
hehe 'Fuck it all' nice, very punk! :D
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:45 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: I'll Be Waiting
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1482
Re: I'll Be Waiting
its cool... emotional, real... & long!
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:32 pm
- Forum: Your Lyrics
- Topic: Ok
- Replies: 12
- Views: 4513
Re: Ok
i was wondering.. does anyone have any info on copywriting songs?
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:14 pm
- Forum: Other Music
- Topic: Avril
- Replies: 142
- Views: 31766
Re: Avril
btw, avrril is in london right now - launching a fragrence called black star ! :)
hope she puts out a new CD soon :)
hope she puts out a new CD soon :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:09 pm
- Forum: Other Music
- Topic: I Hate Kate
- Replies: 38
- Views: 4190
Re: I Hate Kate
to be honest, i'm not too into zebrahead etc.. they just hve a particular tone with their songs..
maybe if they had new material soon?...
maybe if they had new material soon?...
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:02 pm
- Forum: The Sums
- Topic: NEW ALBUM late 09 or 10 shit
- Replies: 87
- Views: 8627
Re: NEW ALBUM late 09 or 10 shit
but at te same time, i am a bit dissapointed there's not a lot of sum 41 material to come soon...!
roll on the new CD :)
roll on the new CD :)
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:00 pm
- Forum: The Sums
- Topic: NEW ALBUM late 09 or 10 shit
- Replies: 87
- Views: 8627
Re: NEW ALBUM late 09 or 10 shit
to be honest, i'm just happy its this soon.. (2010) , cause y'know, UCH was only summer 07///
its usually 4 years inbetween with most ppl..
its usually 4 years inbetween with most ppl..
- Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:30 pm
- Forum: Musicians
- Topic: BASS GUITAR THING....
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1504
Re: BASS GUITAR THING....
cool, thanks for info :D